Friday 12 March 2010

Rough Cut Feedback

Overall the narrative is good, a well thought out idea and presented well. However, we feel the duration of some of the shots at the end are a bit quick when it's trying to show a desolate area. The sound effect between the voice overs is slightly repetitive and if there could be varied sound effects used for this (white noise) then it would be less repetitive. Finally, the last shot does seem a bit random and the spinning will surely have to be done by man which contradicts the statement that no one is left.

S252

we think that the sound has been used really well. we like the sound effects used in between the radio broadcasts, and the broadcasts themselves. however we think there needs to be more movement within the video footage. i found myself looking away from the screen and just listening to the broadcast. there also needs to be more consistency within the shots. overall, we liked it.

S2-53
We liked the use of the news reporting scene's. We liked the camera's angle. We did not see the point in showing us a chimney (or any other blank a lifeless areas) at the start of your sequence. The sound effects in between the broadcast's were very good. There needs to be some movement within the scenes. We found ourselves looking away from the screen, because we found it sex visually uninteresting. We thought it was more like a horror than a thriller. like 28 days later.

S2-54
we think it is really good, however the credits should stay on for longer so as we can read them. the sound track is really, good, and the way it is in between the broadcasting makes it more tense. the black an white bike tyie is slightly random because of the colour change but yeah it is good.

S2-49

We think that entire sequence is really effective especially the soundtrack. We like the way you have put the still images in conjunction with the extracts but we would have like to have seen more moving footage. We also think that perhaps by putting your own soundtrack and sound effects it could raise your overall mark. The last point we would like to make is that we think that the editing should speed up towards the end to build tension and suspense.

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